About the Page: Finally, after month and month of painting, the first page of the redone is finished. It was hard to find a style wich will hopefully work in the following pages too. The hardest was the decision for the lettering
These were the former pages:
Coworkers: Doerk, Torben and cowriting
credits & tools: brushes [link] pagedesign & lettering [link] Wacom Cintiq [link] for a drawing-training where i got some quite helpful tipps about drawing and paneling.
Very nice! May I make some suggestions for the grammar though? Instead of 'Once upon a time.. there was the wood, the snow and me.. and there was my pack.. and my prey,' it would probably sound less awkward as 'Once upon a time, there was the woods, the snow, me with my pack... and my prey.'
'Once upon a time' is a very cliche opening line though. You might want to get rid of it and cut right to the rest, like 'There once was the woods, the snow, me with my pack...'