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Jarret - chapter 01-17 by poisonmilow Jarret - chapter 01-17 by poisonmilow
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storytelling continues... I´m really eager to paint some of the following pages and to redo the older ones. But I don´t want to hurry and to mess the pages up by not taking the time each page deserves.
(I´ve learned a lot about lighting in this page and got trained with using grain a bit more.)

I was asked for blank pages for translations. They will come, but maybe with the redo or when I find the older PSD data, which were on a broken PC.

I love all your comments and the attention Jarret gets. It feals so great that I´m connected with a character of my own. I´ve never thought about that. Yes, he was a roleplaying character of mine, but I never thought about the Comic-Jarret as an Avatar. Thank you. Without DA the story would have never gone that far.

... and sorry to Doerk :iconu007651: who had to find a way to translate "Aufbackbrötchen". He did an amazing job. :w00t:

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Thanks for helping with the translation and designing Torben to Doerk :iconu007651:

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For the people who knew me, maybe you will find any time a character in this story which is inspired by you, than it shouldn´t be a kind of mind-theft, just an tribute. (And if it is possible, I´ll ask first.)
I´ll try to leave out every roleplaying systhem. Althoug I´ll try to leave out rules of style. Maybe I´ll draw one strip as one panel in a very realistic style and the next one has a lot of panels and anime-style.
The only thing I´ll try to keep ist that it must be possible in every style to catch the characters.
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JarrettOnions Sep 20, 2011   Digital Artist
you should really not use adonihs' hair brush.. it ruind your picturs, and btw he doesnt even use it him self...
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poisonmilow Sep 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
ok.

Iīm currently working on a whole redo of all pages. Hopefully it will turn out good in the end.
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JarrettOnions Sep 21, 2011   Digital Artist
Yeah i read that in the comments of the last page. i was very impressed at your improvement from chapter 1 to chapter two. especially scene as the major improvement happened so suddenly.
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poisonmilow Sep 21, 2011  Professional General Artist
Well, I started drawing in 2006... itīs a while ago. Looking back at that point I see myself as a beginner of drawing with the computer. So there must be a redo before there can be more pages. Unless I woulnīt be satisfied.
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JarrettOnions Sep 21, 2011   Digital Artist
Haha yeah i understand. im also a perfectionst. i only got my tablet about a year ago and then drew like 2 pictures with a mouse before that. i seriously don't know how i survived the first 18 years of my life without a tablet :D
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juliana-any44 Jun 18, 2010  Student Writer
Is it done?(I mean.. haven't you continued yet?) I'm in love with this comic xD
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poisonmilow Jun 18, 2010  Professional General Artist
Iīm sorry, my computer crashed on monday and tuesday again. Now itīs fixed and I could continue painting on page 18. But I didnīt manage do finish it today. :(

Thanks for your kind words. Comments like yours helped me to come to this point with the story and to go on further. :)
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juliana-any44 Jun 18, 2010  Student Writer
Please do it soon. Jarret is addicting. I showed the COVER for a friend and she is addicted as well. Well, no hurry. :D

I always give kind words when I comment. If I don't, that means I didn't like it. (except for comics) You're welcome anyway ^^
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poisonmilow Jun 19, 2010  Professional General Artist
Feel free to give critique, too, if you have some. Without critique thereīs no evolution. ;)
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juliana-any44 Jun 19, 2010  Student Writer
Well, I hardly have a critique, my artsy known is to little. I'm better with stories xD
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