About: Crappy, sketchy next page. I´m testing different coloringstyles and drawing. I´m getting better in perspective and anatomy and this labour is just quicker than the whole rendered pages. Doerk didn´t have the time for translating and cowriting, so the text sketchy too.
I hope you like it anyway. I look forward for better pages.
I love the way you draw! and the light and the poses are wonderful ^^ thought I did notice a typo on second panel, "toally", you probably wanted it to be "totally" ^^